unmarkedterritory

Great poem! You are super talented! You have great stanza structure and flow to your poem. You start with a steady lead into unknown territory, then letting the readers know ...

Beautiful work! I love how your lines are only 3-6 words long. I think you should space it only ( not because I do not like the idea of cluttered ...

There is no such things as an emotion too raw. But readers can be step back by poetry while they are reading it because of the language ( profanity) or ...

Although emo poetry isn't exactly the best, it is a start. It is a start of putting emotion on paper. Good poetry in my opinion takes the reader on a ...

I really appreciate the tips and help! :D

Great poem! I love how you structured the poem and leave the punch for the end. This really allows the words to sink in and then be forced to think ...

Great work! I love the way you have structured your poem. It flows extremely well and I love how it seems like a mess of words with a very specific ...

I love the receptiveness in the poem, because even the though the emotion changes the underlying theme doesn't. This is a poem you can read again and again gaining new ...

Great poem! Love the flow,the words and especially the feel! I love how you start off with the conversation with you and your mind. The fact that the readers do ...

Well done! That was incredible! The title has a beautiful flow off the tongue and as when used in the poem. It brings forward the undiagnosed and unsolved issues that ...

Hey YWS I am super stoked to be here! You guys seem super talented and friendly for the hour I have been online. A little about me, I am going ...

Beautiful! A great approach of love. I love how the result is it doesn't solve everything, yet makes a huge difference. Makes the reader feel like their is hope, and ...

How do we attempt to string words anew to describe the presence of wonders that we view A tickle in your ear of a cheerful birds tune As it intertwine's ...

Really powerful work...that is a super tough subject that you executed extremely well. You kept a really great back and forth motion with the mother and child. The fabrication and ...

I find the best poems are when you look upon a situation in a person or object least likely to be a "significant" point of view. WELL DONE! Amazing angle ...