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Hey! No I mean in terms of getting things published or making a career out of my writing!

Hey guys! I love writing short stories and poetry, mainly for the release emotions and creativity. Just out of curiosity, where could I go with poetry?

Head out to explore, the ruby red, the glistening gold and warm orange covered paths. The colours are motionless laying in harmony over one another. Their frames staggered towering above ...

Sometimes giving a vague image of what the end of the novel will look like, smell like, feel like or sound like is a good opening line!

WOOOOW a poem that makes the reader never want to stop reading! Congrats! I love the flow and stanza structure of your poem! My only criticism is to review some ...

Nice creative piece! I love the flow of your words and the sounds they created! I understand the theme detachment is for sure present in the poem! Although maybe you ...

Paint me a set of lips Full and plump with passion Smooth as silk when I speak And as I speak I know I will be heard Paint me a ...

I love how you used the i love you and i hate you through the whole poem. It gives people persecutive of how the narrator doesn't change her feelings through ...

This is a great piece! The structure is spot on and the length was perfect. You had soem great spots in your piece ... The lightest of things combined to ...

BEAUTIFUL! I understand why people have not reviewed this yet, it is very bizarre and very powerful. I love your use of auras, describing them in colours and emotions. Truly ...

Very well done! Such a creative and beautiful idea! It kinda reminds me of someone suffering from an anxiety or panic attack! I really the structure of your piece, I ...

Great poem! I totally got the sense of questioning an unhealthy relationship, and the complex emotions that go with it! Your stanza sizes were prefect, and i enjoyed your rhyme ...

Beautiful! Short. Sweet. Heart felt. I really liked your link with nature in the beginning, really introduced the punch well. I love how you hook the reader with short simple ...

Very interesting! I agree with everyones thoughts about the structure. But non the less, brilliant content! Not that this matters, but I agree with your philosophy! This is gutless to ...

Very very nice :D