unknownlover347

Let me first say Bravo! I thought this was a beautiful poem. Reminds me of a poem I did, but this is way better and more detailed. :D Going Crazy ...

Why do you feel the need to tear me up Into pieces so small Little parts of me i'll never get back Lies, that glossed over it all Now, after ...

I agree with what the previous commenters have said. I think that if you were to make it a little bit more detailed and a few lines longer, it would ...

Yeah.... Lmao xD I know. It was a bad choice of rhyming. I was singing it one day and I thought that it would work depending on how you pronounce ...

Lol Thankyou ChocoCookie! I'll keep your feedback in mind when I draw my next picture :D And I agree, I think the legs were the best out of the entire ...

This Game Life Verse 1: Whispers of so many that sorrow Exchanged with each blink of an eye Hoping for a tomorrow A chance for a renewed life The sound ...

Thankyou SmylinG for the detailed constructive criticism! Lol. I have seen that as a hardship as well. The details are quite easy, it's just the mapping out of the character ...

I never really thought about putting color into the picture. I always thought that if I did that, it would throw the picture off and make it look worse lol. ...

These are pictures of a drawing I copied off from online. It looks really different from the original, I know lol. The hair is awful, yes lol There wasn't enough ...

The story over-all seemed to be quite interesting. The only constructive criticism I have is the changing of verb tenses within the story from past to present. For example: I ...

I think that the general message about Life was given to the readers. However, as stated at the very end of your post, it was a bit confusing and may ...

Is this song meant to be a poem? It seems like a poem from the way that I'm reading it. I like the repetition of that one line When I'm ...

Thankyou for the feedback. The "of" mistake was a typo that I forgot to fix. Lol. Thankyou for pointing it out to me. And I will change the lyrics to ...

Verse 1: These walls around me are slowly falling I feel the ground beneath me shake.. This house once had a strong foundation But now it's cracked with fear and ...

How exactly do you post your pictures up on the site? I understand that you need 100 points to be able to post your stories and pictures. But I don't ...