unknownlover347

This song is supposed to be a story told by a friend or a close relative of the man, hence why I put, "This is what he said" as the ...

FIrst off, I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading this poem. It seemed like a well description of a demon and how its existence brings destruction and death to ...

I once knew a man And he was so happy So very happy This is what he said "I once knew a woman And she made me happy. So very ...

Correct me if I'm wrong, but for some reason, I feel as if the poem is supposed to be about how blind people are, making their minds clouded and rained ...

I feel like I am painting With these two hands, I am staining The canvas with different colors Of my emotions now raging Everything is slowly turning Everything is slowly ...

I'd have to say, with such a touchy subject and with the memorial coming up for 9/11, I'd have to say this was a beautiful story that captured what happened ...

It's hard to top off the previous comment because that was an amazing review lol. But I'll try my best to make a good review of my own. :D I ...

Thankyou for the very descriptive review :D I used "booming" and "silence" together because I was confused if whether or not I wanted to make this into a poem or ...

When I wrote that line: Until it rains or when no one hears I tried to say that I can only cry when it rains, because at that time, my ...

From rise to set, I always try To keep my head up towards the sky But how come everytime I try, I end up on my knees and cry? From ...

You have me tear-filled. More like just straight up crying from this poem because I've gone through that kind of betrayal with a friend and I did the same thing. ...

I'll have to agree with sparksflying when they said that it would be a good plot for a movie. You have a man who goes astray, in search for something ...

The eyes are not as great, I know lol I know, I gave him worms >.< The shirt wrinkles were horrible xD This is my favorite part of the drawing. ...

I like this lol If only I knew how it would sound, then I could give this a better critique. Is there anyway you can post music for this on ...

It was a quiet day within the household of the Riveras. The halls boomed loud strikes of silence, with just the sound of the wind pushing against the rustling branches ...