unknown_soul

Romantic Short Stories Re: Love Song
Overall, I liked it. It's quaint and lovely. I'd definately read more. My critiquing is in red. Prologue I stared into his ocean blue eyes, the (I would put 'a ...
Sep 15, 2009

I understand what you're saying, and your comments are valuable, but I'm gonna ignore your advice.
— Roald Dahl