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I got that.

Oh believe me, Hono gets a LOT harder to defeat later when man is less strong.

This is set in a parallel world to Earth, so some of the creatures are the same. Besides, it's very hard to just plop a reader down in a world ...

Thank you for reviewing~!! The speech is intended to be formal-ish. There will be more variety in their speech patterns as we get to know them.

Thank you so much, Kekai! I'll definitely fix all of these things.

The chapters are going to be released in two parts: the folk-tale that I submitted now, and a telling of the story in the present. It's almost two stories being ...

This isn't a review, but what I'm about to say here will help you to get more reviews. People here on YWS (sadly) are partial to shorter stories. So what ...

Thank you so much! I'll make these edits right away! I was copying this from a written work, which accounts for the typos. As for your comment on the genre, ...

Ah. The reason that Hart is in there is because there is a character named Hart. I originally had it so that his name was spelled "Heart", but I changed ...

I had this way way longer. 5000 words per chapter. However, I wasn't getting any reviews at all.

I originally had this as the intro, but I was persuaded to have it stand alone.

Thank you so much, once again, for your review. If you're ever bored, you can review this piece. Also, in accordance with your request, I have a novel that I've ...

I have included the first paragraph to describe to the reader that, not only is she waterlogged, but she was also in the ocean. Also, it's exploited briefly in the ...

Thank you so much or reviewing. As for the kiss, due to the recent new episode of the series, the kiss should be OK. Of course, not for die hard ...