twilightxd

Hey, I'm going to critique the second scene. Tim: Uncle Bill gave it to me it’s a gift did he give you a gift? this should probably be three sentence ...

Thanks for the reviews. They really helped. I'm posting more soon.

It is supposed to be a fantasy romance story kinda like twilight except a different plot and there aren't any vampires or werewolves.

sorry for the unfinished review, but I had to get off the computer. My little sister just stood there with a blank face tears rushing down her face, then there ...

Thanks for the help. The story actually doesn't start until chapter three. I'm only using chapters one and two to get it started.

Thanks. No I wasn't intending to rhyme in the second stanza.