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Re: Train Wreck (ch 1) Rewrite
Hey everyone, I realized that my last Train Wreck chapter was a mess so I rewrote it in the main characters point of view and with a lot more detail, ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
I haven't read the boy in the striped pajamas, but I really enjoyed your version. I really like how you describe the scene in a child's point of view especially ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
I really liked this one because it had a lot of detail of their surroundings and the charicteres. great job :D :wink:
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: When I'm With you.
Thanks. No I wasn't intending to rhyme in the second stanza.
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: When I'm With you.
The raging waves flow higher. The juicy strawberries become riper. The exotic rain forest grows vaster. The full, glowing moon rises sooner. When I’m with you. The shriveled, sick flowers ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Train Wreck Chapter one
ok, this was a mess up. Please go to Train Wreck the rewrite and comment.
Dec 4, 2008