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The only thing I knew at that moment was to get away, 'cause they wanted me, bad. Who wanted me? Why the towns people, of course! I shot through the ...

that was so good! what is it called?

Answers to ur questions are: 1.its a sound of motion of his fist flying through the air. then it hits her a she falls backwards from the force 2.got it ...

thank you. ch.3 should be in by late november. as for ch. 2, i tried to reveiw the posts and it was all messed up with missmatched squares and 'Mac ...

that was a really good start, i say you add more on to it.

2 ~ Whynn ~ FOOSH!!! I fall backwards and a pain in my stomach grows. I look up at my friends and ask what happened. “It was Joey again.” My ...

Rena~ i changed "rang" to "rings" and too out the paragraph where i only described the house. i only started writing in october so i dont exactly have any good ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Have you been to the Welcome area to introduce yourself? If not, it's a really great place to meet some people and get some points (which ...

great start, but i think you could add a little more, i agree as well, it was rushed. those are just my thoughts, it's great so far!

[color=#FF8000][color=#FF8000]1 ~ Bree ~ As dismissal bell rings I shut my science book and shoved them in my desk with the rest of my things. Then I stand up, grab ...