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Thank you. I wrote that peice quickly, and just came up with it as I went along. I love rain, the way it's so fragile and elegant, but the strongest ...

That was wonderful. The way it flowed was elegant and the way the opening snatched my attention, I'll never know. It wqas great, but could use a touchup, just tiny ...

It seems good so far, and you are great at coloring the personality, but you might want to proofred it. I'm no grammar freak, but my Aunt is, so she's ...

Much can be partained by pictures, Therefore I try to paint a picture with words, With colors and feelings and smells and sights. But you cannot trust in me, trust ...

That, my friend, was absolutly wonderful. Short, but wonderful. You could make it abit longer, and then... WOW. I agree with Calligraphy, and Story Weaver13. Although light does not reach ...

I’ll march out of darknesswith my head held high.I’ll march out of darknesswith my eyes to the sky…I’ll come out of shadowsand bare my scars to all.I’ll come out of ...

Rain has many voices, Those we cannot hear, Though when we truly listen, Whispers whislte with the wind. Though many cannot understand, Some have the heart to know, That the ...

Although in your heart, You may have the desire of perfection, Do not give in, For perfection's sister is not adventure nor love nor risk, And life is nothing without ...

I think its a good start. I want to read more. This is a great story, it's deffinatly got potential. Please, checkout my post, it's called, 'Reilly Soar'. Check it ...

Good. I havent read the first few chapters, so i was lost. I like the diolouge, very animated. You might want ot try to describe a bit more. What color ...

Umm... I dont know exactly wat you mean by "pump up thier personality" like, how would i do that? Thanks. If you like this, you should read the books "The ...

When my mother woke up from fainting, she smiled at me and said, "The witchdoctor must be burned. Tell the village." So I did. Let me tell you, were the ...

NO NO NO N0 NO! DYLAN CANNOT, I REPEAT CANNOT, REPLACE FANG! I ♥ FANG N' MAX AS A COUPLE! (im sooooooooooooooo sadddd!)

Thank you. I'm going to try to post part 2 in a few days, so check in soon!

Have you read the first few (5) books of the series? The first is 'The Angel Experament: A Maximum Ride Novel' They were AWESOME! Angel, frankly, is creeping me out. ...