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I know! Like me... brown eyes, blondeish brown hair, maxish attitude... I'd be perfect for the part of max! Just get a cute guy to be Fang, please, not some ...

That was great, especially for a beginer piece. You have potential in poems, and to get a better grasp on 'em check out someone elses work, thats what i did, ...

That was great, especially for a beginer piece. You have potential in poems, and to get a better grasp on 'em check out someone elses work, thats what i did, ...

I'm going to avoid the maximum ride movies like the plauge.

The Series of Unfortunate Events. They killed it when they made the movie. I completly agree. Also all the Narnia movies, and the Happy Potter movies, the directors killed them, ...

Ripples come flowing out to the banks The soft brown banks of the clear blue pond. A large green leaf is in the middle, Of the clear blue pond with ...

As I sit here I think, I think of what’s going on, I think about what’s going to happen, I think about what’s already happened. Okaaaayyy... I'm pretty sure that ...

Thank you, Dannielle. I have felt this way many times before, but not so much now. I hope that this feeling will never come to pass anyone else, but yet ...

This sounds like my kinda book. I will post more later for critiquing purposes, hasta lavista peeps.

That was great, especilly if you are new to the concept, but f.y.I, I'm pretty sure there's supposed to be 4 lines per stanza...

Thank you. I've read it through, and the you gets kinda annoying when you get right down to it. I never actually lost someone recently, I just put on someone ...

That was just... wow. It delivers a clear messega, but you must have the heart and soul and brain to figure it out. Writers are goos at making insirational pieces, ...

Angels may float down and bless my soul. But I am never released, From the cruel memory of you. How you loved me and how I loved you, But now ...

Thank you. This is the first poem I've written (accept those chessey kind you writ in grade school, but they don't count, do they?) And I must admit, this is ...

Thank you. I must admit, It's a bit rough around the edges, yet that can be fixed.