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"No get off me! Leave me alone- Darren you messed up not me, there is nothing left between us if there ever was anything.." I hissed hatred making my eyes ...

ooooooooooooo. cuz he stabbed their hearts (and their backs...)

Well, the thing is, the creepy 9yr old girl was Lloretta. The boy lunged at her because he was a thug, and well, he was brave, this girl was creepy, ...

Loretta's sun blond hair streamed behind her as she flounced away from Matthew and Esther. She turned and smiled at Esther, "Essie, leave 'em. He's got no right what-so-ever to ...

I saw it last night, it was epic. I like your poster bythe way!

Depending on the age/culture this is set in, (or non-culture/age) this could be the norm in society or completely unacceptable, but I'm not sure where your story is set. It's ...

That was clever! I think it doesn't make anysense at all, but that's why it's so good. But hey, you have to stand back to see some art. Keep writing! ...

'city of ember' was awful.

Thank you. I try to use diolauge, but then I get caught up in that and sort of forget about the description... oh well. Also, I ain't exactly the most ...

Cooleo. Welcome to YWS. Don't worry, I'm not gonna steal Pink, I already have a bf. He's a great writer though. Be sure to check out some of my pieces, ...

Okay, this story doesnt have a title yet. Please let me know if you have any suggestions! Thanks, ~Tee ------- "Mercy, mercy, MERCY!" Lloretta's bell-toned voice wafted up through the ...

I like it. Original and well... zesty. I really like this line, but *weeeooooowwweeeeooooo* (that was the grammar siren) GRAMMAR ERROR! “Stupid? I’M being stupid? You’re the one jumping around, ...

I really really like that piece. It tells a story in and of it's self. I thought it was creative and thought provoking, and I liked it.

Okay, this is worst as in sad, not worst as in a I've-read-the first chapter-and-it-is-so-boring-that-i-want-to-put-it through-the-paper-shredder-even-though-it's-a-library-book book. This book was sa

YAY Happy B-day YWS! I'll try to call in!