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First off, I love the title. Second, I love the poem, but it kind of confused me... are you trying to do a rhymey poem? It kind of sounded like ...

Yay, Simba!!! Okay, as much as I hate the idea of an old Simba.... *shivers* I thought that this was very well written. The flow was perfecto, and it did ...

I rolled my eyes. Angel tried a smile, but I scowled at her until she retreated into her bedroom. She had better lock the door tonight. I turned back to ...

I really liked this story!! I feel like scratching my arms when you talk about the ants... gross!! Still, I thought it was very skillfully written, and I love the ...

That was really good!! And thank you so much for describing the blood-sucking in such vivid detail!! It's just the thing I want after lunch!! But really, you did a ...

Actually, this is part two of another post called Angel: A Maximum Ride novel. And, granted, this is a bit confusing because it is the next book in a series ...

I woke up the next morning satisfied. I had finally accepted the he was gone. I yanked the comforter off, and slid out of bed and into the kitchen to ...

Okay, first off, I am a huge HP junkie, and I thought this was absolutely wonderful! Congrats on your first piece, and welcome to YWS! Now on to the nitpicking… ...

8. Women secretly control the men in their life. - This is true. Even those controlling men who want to dominate, they don't really. Behind every man's good decision, there's ...

You want to know the worst part about love? When your "boyfriend" jumps off a cliff. Now don't go, "*Gasp!!*" He didn't die, although I wish he did... He's got ...

Harry Potter was in the forbidden forest looking for his beloved, Hermonie. He heard someone walking behind him. Crack, some leaves crunched under his feet. He turned around and felt ...

The cars flashed by in mixed blurs. I strained my eyes down the road, desperately. I kept on telling myself that there had to be a way out of this. ...

The next morning, Lloretta Leshwinski woke up with a horrible headache. She staggered to the bathroom and wet her face with fresh spring water from the pump. She knew that ...

I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named after my great father, Edmund Roberts, a soldier in some war or something. I know ...

Wowzas, Kaka! That was good! It was really cute, about family and... life, duh! I liked it, and you should keep writing peices like this. It was really good. ~Tee