turtlethatroars

it is a very very good is short but it says a lot if you know what I mean.keep on writing.

it is great.

it is great.

it is a great poem/short story.

i loved the poem it is really good.

good poem.

it is a very good poem i like it.

it is a very good poem.

it is a very good poem.i can picture it in my head.

i love it!!!!!!!!

it is cool.

it is a good poem.i like the rhyming.short and simple can be good at times.

it is a good poem i like it.

I like the reminds me of a part in a book called "Book Of A Thousand Days".

thanks for the class loved it.