turtlethatroars

It was suppose to be a nursery rhyme at first but I thought that it was a little to...... odd? to be one. You probably could sing it ;)

I wasn't really trying to imitate anything. It just came to me one day and I built on it.

I liked it alot. I don't think you need to change anything. my favorite part is if you sit below the maple tree you can see the glowing leaves like ...

As everyone eles says I think it is funny too. your something might be cooler than mine but, it doesn't work as well. haha I am funny. I haven't met ...

My teacher made my write it for a poetry unit we were working on.

Black Dark Warm Moonlight Shadows Peaceful Bees Buzzing Birds Chirping The hum of the air The whispering of the wind Calm Sleepy Laughing Playful Is this real?

Fall, Fall, Fall away. Fall, Fall into yesterday. Sleep, Sleep, tonight you sleep. Till Dawn awakens you, don't say a peep. Wake, Wake in the night. Breathe, Breathe to calm ...

welcome to anyone new :D.hope you enjoy the site. :D

That is a really good poem.the way you wrote about the strings i thought was great. i couldn't find any thing wrong with it either. keep on writing,can't wait to ...

I am open to all opinion's.State your mind but remember i am only in 7th grade but doing 8th grade work.

what i have to say is all is fair in love and war, and love hurts some times.

When I see you it's like a dream. A dream I don't want to wake up from. A deep sleep dream, One that is hard to wake up from. A ...

You blame other's for the mistakes you did, even though your own glass is covered by a lid. You think you are the best, but you are no better than ...

You blame other's for the mistakes you did, even though your own glass is covered by a lid. You think you are the best, but you are no better than ...

People claim to have broken hearts, but mine just won't work. The machine is hardly beating anymore and I am starting to come to terms.(i don't know if you meet ...