turtlechow

Currently, I'm reading Under the Net by Iris Murdoch. It's on the list of the 100 Top Novels of the 20th Century, and is number 95, though so far they ...

When I started reading this poem, I totally thought you were dissing your cat, but I know exactly how it feels to own a cat that doesn't let you work ...

I'm not sure exactly what it is about this poem that makes me like it, but I definitely like it. I can totally relate as I am now a college ...

I do say, this is quite an interesting piece. The plot has me captivated, and though the flow was choppy at a few points, I really can't complain. Very enjoyable ...

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I think you need to have some parallelism. Separate your subjects: A soft velvet nose where just being able to touch it is like a kiss on the cheek. Big ...

Naturey poems are good... I heart them a lot. Very nice; I definitely like the rhythm and the words employed in forming this poem. Keep up the good work!

Lovely, lovely poetry! There are some seriously deep emotions here, I think (even though I hate romance of every kind... LOL). Anyway, it just goes to show that not all ...

Ooh, bravo... a good start with an interesting potential main character. I'm sad for Jazool, though, but it really does capture the cruel realities of the world nicely. Well done! ...