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Olivia’s Off Writing (Steven King already took “On” Writing) or Why I like Words more than Numbers. February 6, technically February 7. I adore alliteration. It’s like my favorite thing ...

I agree with Upile, the consistent pattern is impressive. This poem inspired me to go outside and walk my dog. Thank You. p.s. I really like your username and your ...

It sees the darkness clouding in that is death, Which reeks of pollution, and its endangered inhabitants. ^These are the only two lines that don't ryhme. I know this may ...

Your power is in poetry my friend.

Our old black (now mostly gray) pug laid between my brother and me on an old turquoise towel in the back seat of our red 1993 Ford Tracer. Something was ...

This is wonderful. It's short and sweet, no it's so much more than short and sweet. It's full of feeling, and even though it is short, it has structure and ...

Bolshevik: You're right, I don't know what Deux es machina is. What is Deux es machina? Two something? Deux= two en francais. (I take Frecnch in school, I don't actually ...

Me: You Suck. You:?? Me: You suck because I can’t study. You suck because sometimes I can’t sleep. You suck because when I see “suck” I think vacuum. You suck ...

"Athena sat down and started to weave, telling the story as she did it." Everything flows well untill the very last sentence. Something about ending the chapter with "it" is ...

Thanks for the reply! I didn't win :( But I very much enjoyed writing this speech and participating in the contest.

I agree with WaitingForLife, this has a very good flow. To be truthful, at the begining I thought the narrator was a creeper. But the end explains it all and ...

Change is about choices. Influence comes from ideas. Purpose brings progress. When faced with a problem one can choose to overcome it. One can give ideas to solve the problem. ...

oh my ford you should be a poet struck such a meaningful chord i love it

“She wanted to get out of this tower, she wanted to eat when she was hungry, and not when Aurialla sent up the basket. She wanted to run around without ...

"kissed the baby girl for the first and last time." imagery! Kinesthetic Imagery evokes emotion! (sorry, couldn't help but utilize my recent AP Lang vocabulary) I'm still confused about the ...