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Thank you for your feedback! I am always happy to know what worked for my readers! And I am happy you enjoyed.

Thank you for your feedback! I am always happy to know what worked for my readers! And I am happy you enjoyed.

Thank you! I%u2019ll see if I can put more together. I might just be prone to small paragraphs, I%u2019m not sure. Your feedback is helpful! I%u2019m very thankful!

Fixed the error pointed out with the first sentence. Thank you so much all.

Fixed the error pointed out with the first sentence. Thank you so much all.

I%u2019m glad you appreciate it, thank you for your feedback! Hopefully I can improve it even more after a good edit.

That bothered me too, so thank you for helping me fix it! I was noticing it and thinking it was bugging me! As for the term matchbook striker, I had ...

Thanks for these edits, they really help. I was trying to indicate he was using a matchbook. Which is why I had not used the word lighter. I can work ...

Thanks for your feedback! I%u2019m in the process of a rewrite now that should help. The scene at the end escalates so fast that Tim can%u2019t explain all the proof ...

I understand! A lot of people misinterpret the piece and I understand I fail to include enough information to make a concrete conclusion. One can only theorize. I'm currently split ...

Thank you for the comment, friend. I'm trying to work out some small kinks to improve it. Editing is a struggle!

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it! I intended the father to be very stubborn in believing paranormal exists. I'm not surprised you're a bit annoyed by how stubborn he ...

There's not too much horror, I definitely agree. The only scary aspect might be the mother, or maybe the paranormal bits. Although, there are only three instances in which the ...

Thank you for your feedback! I guess I left it up to the reader as to why the spirit/entity is protecting the daughter. To me, it might be something simple, ...

Thank you for your feedback! I guess I left it up to the reader as to why the spirit/entity is protecting the daughter. To me, it might be something simple, ...