trhwrites

Not here to review; just to say: Wow. That was such a good story to begin with, and everyone already think they know what's going to happen. The last paragraph ...

Mikaylakk25----Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it! LibbyLovesDrums----- LoL I love your name.... Anyway, Ya, I'll review it for you!

Thanks to you both; a really appreciate the help. I haven't been writing for long and this is my first real novel-type story. I think that I might add on ...

[quote="trhwrites"]This was a rollercoaster of emotions for me and the MC (obviously). At first I was like, wow, this is a cool concept. Then, I realized how deep the writing ...

Wondering if you would review some of my work. . . I have two novels in the works. Finding You is under general fiction and Untouchable is under romance. Thanks ...

Dear all~ I guess this was exceptional. Just growing up with you. Remember when we first met? All timid newcomers on the first day of high school? There was Marcie, ...

Okay, overall I thought this piece could have been great with a little work. It had a nice plot, a solid character that we're starting to get a feel for, ...

The cold wind whipped across the lush landscape the only response being the dancing of the oak trees and the quivering of the bushes and grass. Joslyn Jayne Park adjusted ...

Since I can't indent, every time a line is skipped it signifies a new paragraph. Please comment and critique. “Turn on the game, Mads,” Chad said, kicking his feet up ...