treecub

I didnt think the start of this story was worthy of the rest-the dream was more like a poem but it was , in a wierd way-catchey- but still try ...

what warcraft sais is true- ive visted other sites and they mention posetive aspects and negetive aspects-his storie had structure and good description but all some people came up with ...

Ok, ill try and fix it, but the beggining took me ages because it sounded much more akward with out an explanation for the description but thanks for the review.

The beach at night was an odd place to be, All the senses were filled, for smell the humid air carried the whiff of the jungle and the salt of ...

i was gonna write a big contractiolations message but that wouldent really help you, so i tried to find somthing wrong and after reading it twice i realized somthing about ...

this felt wierd , it had good metaphors and discriptions but i think what made me dislike it was how it was written, in first person past tense , i ...

i saluut you all for replying and i know it takes along time to reply so, erm...i salut you.

I...this...huh? how the hell can you produce somthing like this?, are you jk rowling in disguise , are you , ARE YOU!, you must be published by now, i mean ...

while i was reading this , i enjoyed it, you broke some writing rules and at some points(as grifinkeeper has highlighted)you left some stuff out, but so what, if i ...

HALLO!, may it be known that treecub has become a member, i am thirteen and i think im a decent writer, i hope i can help you lot with your ...