traveller

This a great piece!! I particularly like the way you've managed to convey the feeling of love between the siblings. Also, the imagery conveyed in the description of the star ...

I know!!! I loved that too. Homer's approach is quite unique. You've made great choice here!

I can't really add much to what has already been said but I just had to comment on the great imagery in this piece. Definitely very poetic and a refreshing ...