tragicHearts

Meant for that to say thank you :)

Thank for talking time to point out some of the grammar mistakes instead of just saying they are there. Going to fix what you pointed out when I get time.

Sorry about grammar it is a weak spot for me.glad it wasn't thank you for talking time to review this.

Yeah I won't lie grammar is one of my weakest things. Glad to hear the weaver's idea is different.

Thank you glad it is something different.I will send you a pm when I get the next chapter up. It will be awhile though because I still have to write ...

thank you for the review and hope you will come back to read the next part which wont be so short.

I didn't find it mean at all and appreciate all the help I can get. Grammar is one of my weak points so I'm glad for any help with that. ...

Thank you david for the review,and i reworked it some hoping,I made some of the abilty to controling a element more clear. Also Hope you would be willing to read ...

Thanks for the review,and i reworked it some hoping i made some of the controling elements more clear. My plan is to reveal her past slowly as she learns more ...

Thank you for even giving this a chance and I'm going to make changes now.

Thank you for taking time to review. I really your suggested changes especially the first two sentences. Sounds so beautiful wish I thought of it that way unfortunately thought I ...

I won't mind at all will probably get time to review yours tomorrow. A collaboration sounds like fun to me. :) good luck on your writing too.

Thank you for the advise its means a lot to me and I now that I have read it again I can see what you mean by choppy. In fact ...

Hello I'm new to this site and not the best writer so bear with me.I found this very interesting and pretty food amount of detail to keep me reading

I don't know much pretty new to writing but wow very good kept my attention. You described things really good in my opinion. Going to keep an eye out for ...