trackgal6

This is very creative. It seems like a dream, with all the things happening, and then also tells you about her past. Very creepy. Quote: Her neck and a rope ...

Ok, I'm starting to understand now. It's good the way you started them out separate, told a little bit about each of them and brought them together. I can't wait ...

I'm a little confused as to who is narrating here. I think you should put a little more detail. I think your storyline so far is interesting but hard to ...

I really like it. I think that you had a great cliffhanger at the end. I can't wait to see what happens next. Corrie saying that she doesn't like tea ...

Yeah its a diary. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the tips, I'll go back and add more detail! :D

September 1, 2007 Today is the first day of eighth grade. I want to cry because Laurie completely blew me off. So much for BFF. She was trying to impress ...

I really like your story. You grab the readers attention at the begining and keep them interested until the end. The way he asks these things about her life tells ...

I really liked your story. I think you should add a little more detail about how she got the bruise, and also maybe say something about Faith's personality. It wouldn't ...