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Re: Should we cut dictators a deal?
Do you mean to say that to establish a democracy, the Lib'yans have to fight their own battles? IS the legitimacy of power more important than an end to the ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Lomography
Hey, I love your pictures, particularly the one with the flying birds and the one with the panorama. I've never tried lomography before, but it seems pretty cool. How do ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Ecliptic
Hey. I liked your story, but it could have been developed a lot more. Detail, characters and a central plot or narrative are missing. Also, the idea of darkness bringing ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: I need an interpretive reading.
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an inappropriate use of exclamation points. I loved Jerome K. Jerome's '3 Men in a boat'.
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: I need an interpretive reading.
Hi all. I'm entering a public speaking competition, and am required to perform an interpretive reading which is 5 - 8 minutes in length. It can be anything, poem, prose ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Got any budding plot-bunnies you want to share?
Just a quick thought, rather than collaborating with a single person you could try crowdsourcing the plot. Start with a basic plot, then ask YWSers to come up with details, ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Should we cut dictators a deal?
In a situation like Libya it is our (Western Democracies) decision to make, because not only are we aiding the rebels, but the International Criminal Court has deemed these dictators ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Beethoven's Virus
Hey, you've got a great storyline, but here are somethings I would do to make it more realistic. The conflict is over too fast. When Autumn dials 911 and hears ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Should we cut dictators a deal?
The Arab Spring movement has been on for over a month now, and casualties have run into the thousands. We have a combination of brutal dictators, rebel movements, foreign airstrikes, ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: The Vampire Upstairs
Hey all. This is supposed to be a parody of conventional vampires. Tell me what you think. Not much was unique about 13 Mountview Place. It was a gray apartment ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Watercolor
Hey, Jenthura. I really like the painting. The eye at the top of the triangle sort of reminds me of a dollar bill. Is that where you got your inspiration ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Hi there. (A little late)
Hi there everyone. I'm new here, and didn't realize that there was a welcome mat forum. I actually came up with a story, then searched for a forum to publish ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Well.
Hey Arsenic, (Can I call you Arse?) I was joking. Don't be offended. Welcome. So, I'm new here too. Enough said. I look forward to reading your work.
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: April joining in April?
Oh, and I just noticed, you're from Canada too. *High Five*
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: April joining in April?
Hey there. Welcome to YWS. I'm not sure if I'm qualified to welcome you; I joined last week. Anyway, I look forward to reading your work.
Apr 2, 2011
