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Re: Fairytales From Hell
"Letsraceletsraceletsrace!" said Hare bobbing up and down eagerly. "Oh, this is just so typical. There's a tortoise and there's a hare, so they have to race. Like its some goddamn ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: The Tavern
Tex leaned closer, ignoring the rampaging dog. As an investigative journalist for the Shakespeare Digest he was always interested in tales of mystery and imagination. And Skis was a character ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: I think I'm gonna like it here!
Hey Erin, welcome to YWS. I joined about half a month ago, and its quite a great site. PM me if you need reviews..
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: I think I'm gonna like it here!
Hey Erin, welcome to YWS. I joined about half a month ago, and its quite a great site. PM me if you need reviews..
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: I hate to say this but... Vampires
Hey! So, I'm not going to nitpick or find spelling errors, you can do that yourself. I'm going to talk about content. First of, I like vampires. Not the twilight ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Help needed! I need a topic for a persuasive speech.
Hey all, I have entered a public speaking competition, and one of the categories is a persuasive speech. It can be a topic of my choice, but it has to ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Dreamweavers
Hey restlesspen. I'm tr3x, and I'm going to say some pretty harsh things about this story. I realize you are a new member, so you stll have time to improve, ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: The Violin
A fly buzzed lazily in the sultry afternoon air. A rolled up newspaper sailed through the air, missing it by a fraction of an inch. The shopkeeper grunted, annoyed, and ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Rosabelle
Hey, you really need to work on paragraph structuring. It was a good introductory piece, but I feel it's kind of unoriginal - a story about a damaged young woman ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Quickly Packaged.
Hey, I didn't quite know what this was supposed to be, but I liked it. Very mysterious and all, but it was missing a plot line. There were a lot ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: MS Paint - Beach
WoW! The fact that you did all this in MS Paint amazes me. Do you use a mouse or do you have some other graphic input tool? It must be ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: The Apocalypse: From a Zombie's perspective
Hey everyone. This is my entry for Alphabunny and CarbonCore's Let's Get Apocalyptic Competition. I'd like comments and constructive criticism as I have only tomorrow to edit it. I detest ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Humour Forum
I'm relatively new here, and am amazed by the variety of genres you guys cover at YWS. There are forums for romance, sci-fi, poetry and more. There are a lot ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Blabber On
The one personal item Yuri Gagarin carried into space was shark repellant. In case he landed in the ocean.
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Do you think that the world will have 1 state?
Not a snow-flake's chance in hell. People of the world are too diverse to ever co-operate sufficiently to become one big happy family, and that's a good thing. The bigger ...
Apr 10, 2011
