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I am an utter skeptic, atheist and worshiper of the Flying Spaghetti Monster. Naturally, I am intensely critical of "psi powers". Firstly, there is no evidence of their existence. The ...

Here's mine. Started recently:

How long do you spend on these drawings?

So, I'd like an angel of fire, please. I'm new here, and have never been in a storybook, so please correct me if I make any mistakes. Quick question: What ...

This is a pretty interesting, if biased site.

The election results surprised us all, to be sure. I myself support the Libs, but Ignatieff is too egotistical for my liking. Layton, while charismatic, belongs to a party that ...

As I read this, I could actually picture a young girl walking through a ghost town haunted by disease and death. You capture the character's emotions well, which I find ...

Hey all, I'm part of a pretty active debate club at my school. We go to a lot of university tournaments and get a lot of bills like this, so ...

Hi. I know this is not a whole story, but even for a prologue, it's laughable. You introduce everything too fast, without any introduction or description. The whole 'Ninja School' ...

I generally do not enjoy poetry. I like this. It is confusing. Its not touchy-feely poetry, and neither is it narrative poetry. As far as I can see, you're re-telling ...

Hey Emmylove. So first of, congratulations on staying by the iambic pentameter. Your poem is structured like a Shakespearean Sonnet, so paragraphing it like this would make it a little ...

Hey CelticaNoir, So, I liked your prologue. Haven't read chapter 1 yet, so I have no idea where this is going. No real nit-picks. I might have written things slightly ...

Uh, y---uh, nice balls. MUDKIPZZZ! Haha, this was really great. I love the Nuzlocke challenge, it makes you appreciate Pokemon you'd never use otherwise. Looks like pokerus is spreading on ...

I can't give you a full review at the moment, but I would like to talk about my basic impression of your piece. The way you started the story put ...

Wow. I've been following this thread since it first came out, and have watched as both sides have moved away from the central issue to nitpick each others replies. What ...