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I like that it had a lot of historical elements. I like that you used a lot interesting words. I wonder if you could fix some grammar. I like that ...

I like that it had a lot of action. I like that you describe your characters. I wonder if you could check your grammar and spelling. I like that you ...

I like the historical elements. I like that you know what your topic is on. I like that you put a lot of descriptions. I like that you can tell ...

I like that you used a lot of historical elements. I wonder if you could fix some grammar. I like all of the action. I wonder if you could make ...

I like that you used real Chinese words for your story and told us what they meant. I like all of the historical elements. I wonder if you could tell ...