torsa_n_muse

thanks for your appreciations and criticisms! i think its awesome to hear so many differrent comments from all of you! people have differrent takes on the same thing and that ...

thank you for your response! well i am happy that you all liked the poem and i will take care to check out on the faults that you all mentioned. ...

yeh..well you r right about the tabs, it was tough to actually go thru it and i was loosing track at time, why dont you change colors to format the ...

hey! i liked your script, in fact it gave me some idea of how a screenplay should be written. :) torsa

The melody of life Torn apart by the gust of rollicking wind Hanging like a twitched thread of a sail, Swaying to the command of the breeze, Dancing to the ...

The lost melody! The last droplets of the first shower of the season were still clinging to my glass window rims. In a few minutes Orhilina was to come, for ...

Light O light! You were meant to kindle- The path of light with your flame, But you burn me from top to toe With desires over which, I should have ...

To love Every morning breaks through the fans, Of the palms quiet groves. The seaside fishermen return as, The lush waves summon. River twins the Padma and the Ganges, Slither ...

Time Characters: Male Female :) John-Scientist (research on cryonics) :lol: Doctor- working with John :) Assistants to the Doctor (2) :) Ana-John’s wife, Nuclear Scientist 8) Other Scientist :oops:

:lol: this poem sounded sick to me. the title and the content have a huge differrence in their feel, i feel! on second thoughts i didnt like the sound of ...

hi! i didnot like some of words that you used. some words of your poem seem to be quite out of the lyric pattern. but the poem has good content ...

Hello! Hi i m Torsa, from kolkata, India. i love writing and am a coordinator for a weekly supplementary of teens , tweens and youth. :-({|= besides writing i m ...

Distance Through the dusk, I stared Gazed through the dawn. Through the night I whispered Murmured through the morn. And listened to their song. ‘n’ they all spoke of one ...

BEREFT THE FATIGUE OF ETERNAL WAIT OVERRIDES THE BENT FOR LOVE; AND I THE BRIDE OF THE AGE’S FERRYMAN, STAND TODAY BEREFT. I HAVE SWALLOWED THE THIRST, AND MY VOICE ...