torsa_n_muse

:D Thanx Muse...yeah even this sucks me. when u write a piece and post it u like it 2 be read and then wait for feedbacks but i guess against ...

hi, i have revised the entire piece and edited it, addding punctuations, dividing paras and doing neccesarry changes in confusing sentences. if there's still some correction required or any critcism ...

hi, thank you for reading my poem and liking it. it seems that the last para is bothering most readers so i will try to find a suitable substitute to ...

hi brian, yeah i m from India. i think such a topic like writing is universal in itself and a website that provides universal is bound to reach out. now ...

well, first of all thanks for commenting on the story. yeah, you are right i should have broken it up into more paras, and as for the confusion, i re-read ...

Repose I needed it…the arrival of winter. It wasn’t time though, yet I wanted its onset. Forever in life I have carefully pampered my wants above my duties but how ...

thank you for the appreciation. and as for the last stanza well i needed to have it to explain the first three stanzas and get the meaning of the metaphor ...

this definitely was an entertaining piece and i enjoyed it. but i felt that :idea: it could have a better tiltle- perhaps a shorter one, i cant think of any ...

A winter night's tale The moon shimmers through the branches Of the old dry tree beside the meadow The sky looks gorgeous when compared To the frozen nerved earth below. ...

thanx for your criticism jenn, i will modify my post accordingy! :) your comments were well observed! :D -torsa

Rheum If nothing is lost on earth Living is still at hand. Loser’s tears are drops of silver -The solace on the scorching sand. The venom delicious To be encompassed ...

Cry I was a bud, Awaiting bloom on the sunshine day Saving my fragile tenderness for the hopeful season of bliss. But …it was a fateful moment I was destined ...

Half-ticket That is Lakshmipur railway station. Yeh you are right that giant wall-clock you are seeing runs slow. It approximately loses 10 minutes a day and by that one can ...

:D hi! it is a good poem and above all a fresh one. though i thought the message was repeating itself quite some time yet i enjoyed it. and i ...

My mystique groom Mystique riders to the sea of life Appear just once. They then dissolve away forever Leaving a note for the muzzy soul to dance. Their sight act ...