torsa_n_muse

Subscriber Unavailable For three days now the telephone connection has been disturbing. “ These days they are giving more connections than they can handle. Not enough satellites and look at ...

thanx for that response. yeah...i think u r right i shud replace the 'hues' it doesn't quite go wid the thing, so will edit the poem. but thanks for that ...

There she was. Looking as perfect as always. Waiting right at the turning of the lane. Hoping to hold his glimpse as soon as he arrived. The way she’s been ...

okay so that was indeed a short and sweet effort! kudos!

Black and blue Who are we? An individual or just a medium of execution of someone else’s will or a puppet in the hand of destiny. Do we have the ...

hey that was nice stuff!!!

The Untitled Sometimes things come when you least expect them, or when you really have lost your power to react to the whole issue. Or may be when you are ...

:D well done! but u need certain areas to improve. the story was good, and so was the style, but you shud improve on your presentation! keep it up!

thanx for liking the for the mistakes u point out, i will take them into acount and try to edit the thing accodingly soon. till then god bless, bye! :D

Voice Again a new project…that’s exactly how I reacted yesterday, when my boss entrusted me with this new project. Not that I hate my job, yet I have lost the ...

Flurry Undo the dreams of my night Touch me to make me feel I live Hold me so that I can cower In the radiance that only time could weave. ...

Someone’s there The pieces of music that have always clung to my soul are but strange memories that can’t be retrieved...nor erased. Time just comes to freshen them. After twenty-five ...

hey..u seem to dig out my poems frm oblivion..neways thanx for doing so... as for the rhyming pattern, i just wrote the way i felt, so no forced rhyme..but the ...

i found the poem to flow natuarally and thats something i like. the numbness and bleeding you talk of renders a dark, and intense feel which i appreciate. excep[t for ...

thanx for all the appreciation and crit. it definitely helps. i'll try to revise the stuff and use a more 'intense' language as you said. thanks, anyways! :D