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I must say, I love your poetry. :) I can't wait to read what you'll come up within the next 28 days.

April 2nd - Poem: 3 Song(s) of the Poem: -Cut by Plumb Cry It burns It stings It's many other things It prickles behind my eyes I can't hold it ...

I think Alfreto covered just about everything. I admit, the story was slightly cliche, but it's based off a Taylor Swift song, so I guess it has to be. haha. ...

April 1st - Poem: 1 Song(s) of the Poem: -Hey Stephen by Taylor Swift -Invisible by Taylor Swift (Sorry for the Taylor Swift songs, I know a lot of people ...

In my opinion, minorities just complicate things. If someone in your story is black, call them black, if they're white, call them white. Though when it comes to people who ...

Isn't Russian Roulette a song by Rhianna?

I'm not sure if anyone else is making a NaPo thread like last year, but I want to make one. :) There's a good chance I won't be able to ...

Count me in! I can't wait!!!!! :D

Great poem, I can really relate to it at this time in my life. Now on to the critique- You ran, as to be aborted, That part sounded very forced, ...

Haiku's are one of my favorite types of poetry. I love how someone can write something so short, and still make it beautiful with 17 syllables. I also love to ...

1. David, Matt, Andrew (Andy) 2. Hayden, Brody, Chris

I just wrote these an hour or so ago, so I haven't glossed them up yet. As of lately I've been trying really hard to tune up my haiku writing, ...

Remember, when you post some of your work you need to review at least 3 (I think, correct me if I'm wrong) other people's work. That does sound very advanced ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I have decided to review your poem today. :D Remember that the beginning of every line should be a capital letter. Lost in a world all ...

As y'all can probably assume, my name is Victoria, I hope y'all like it. :D I just wrote it two minutes ago, so it's still pretty rough. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~