tori1234

3/10 I didn't understand it

wow, LilyJamie, your teacher sounds like a lunatic!

A teacher that makes my skin crawl is my History teacher 1. She is old and has fallen of her rocker 2. She stole my french fry! 3. She goes ...

It’s been over five months by now, I want to fill up the pages. But how? I need to write a poem, at least a little rhyme, But my mind ...

I want to know what your favorite name is. Choose a guy name, then tell me why, then choose a girl name and tell me why. Is there a story ...

Oh my gosh! I completely loved that! THIS is the kind of poetry this messed up world needs! I love every stanza of it, and I don't think there is ...

Hey, does anyone else have any other ideas for bad traits for my charactors? (Scroll up!) They need more than just four. And does any body else know what happy-go-lucky ...

It was a little bland for my liking. I think you need to add some more stuff, give some examples of abusive teenage relationships, and maybe even tell about some ...

yay! I get to start a new one! Subject-Songs A- Adding to the Noise by Switchfoot (please add who it's sung by!)

I really liked it. I just have one teeny suggestion. I think you need to combine some of the lines and create some stanzas. And the flow seemed a little ...

For me, it's his hair color. I love guys with black hair!!!! Next it's the eyes. I love me some blue eyed guys! Next is a sense a humor (a ...

That was really nice. It did kind of have a little twist in it. You hear most teenagers saying, "I'm nobody", "He doesn't like me", "They don't want me around," ...

"Daddy", I say in a cute innocent voice, "HIS VOICE ANNOYS THE CRAP OUT OF ME!"

tongue (i have no idea why that reminds me of undead!)

Hey, I really liked that. It had a very nice balance of longing and youthful innocence. And getting that balance is hard to do sometimes. So congratulations on that! When ...