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  • Other Poetry Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me

    I have to admit that I'm a Twilight Fan. I'm not one of those freaking obsessed girls or anything, I just read because I want to read. I so agree ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Six Days

    I'm not going to review this, all the other people above me already help you so much. I just have one question. What did they find in her lungs? I ...

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Word Game

    Pokemon

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Mummy

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish 2

    Granted, but now it is so proper, it has stopped "ticking". I wish for my best guy friend to notice me for more than a friend.

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?

    A lot of different things. But I do have one main one. I was REALLY mad at this guy (I didn't and don't like him, he's just a friend) and ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New to YWS

    Hello Sarah! It's very nice to meet you! You will love this website, I know I sure do! Good luck on your novel! Keep writing!

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lonely Girl

    I loved that! It was so beautiful! Onto the review: I really liked it, but in stanza number one, the tempo seemed a little off to me. That was basically ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Can you name this song?

    Oh my gosh! I totally love The End of Silence by Red! They totally rock!

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What Happened.

    Awwwwwwwww! That was so sweet! I absolutely loved it! Now onto the review: There is really nothing I'd like you to change, except for the fourth line in stanza two, ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Darkness

    I really liked that, I was surprised that you are 11-years-old! (no offense, my writing totally stunk at 11) Now on to the review: It kind of felt like it ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey!

    Hello Gale, it is very nice to meet you! I can already tell that we have a lot in common! I absolutely love Twilight and Harry Potter!

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Length of chapters

    I haven't had one of my books in print yet, but when I am reading a novel, I like the chapters to be long. At LEAST 15 pages, each!

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Outline?

    I picked other, this is what I do- I write out a profile for ALL of my characters. Example. In this current novel I'm writing, it's going to be a ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Question!

    I say go for the whole thing! I am personally a lover of long books! Tell us if (and when) it gets published! Good luck! Keep on writing!!!!!

    Feb 6, 2009


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