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  • Poetry Discussion Re: Is beginners' poetry influenced by lyrics of modern music?

    Yes, music is one of the biggest influences in our lives! Nowadays, a good deal of the songs are pretty shallow and cliche lyric wise, and even if it does ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Favorite poem?

    anything by Dr. Suess. XD Yes, I know he's famous, but he's a literary genius. :D

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: which of these 3 poems do you like better?

    So, I'm trying to decide which poem to incorporate into my novel. Please read the three poems below and choose the one you like best. Sonnets from the Portuguese XIV ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Letters from the Front

    I'm sorry I don't have enough time to do a full critic, so I'll quickly point out the main things. I have just got to my post in Ypres. A ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Crying while writing.... <.< >.>

    I've only cried twice while writing. Once when I had to kill one of my most developed character off, and another time recently when my main character was visiting his ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Christians' Lie

    You have obviously never known a real Christians.

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Shuffle That Playlist!

    I don't know any of the songs but I'll give you a 10/10 anyways. =) 1. In My Car (I'll Be the Driver) by Shania Twain 2. This Time by ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The This, This Or That Questionnaire!

    #1 - Australia (though my favorite place to vacation would be England.) #2 - House: mansion (Victorian plantation style) #3 - Beach #4 - Coconut chocolate #5 - wife/husband #6 ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Organizing *shivers*

    For content organization, I just list what should happen out on a sheet of paper (or twenty). Though if you do that, remember to skip lines so you can add ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Alice

    Such a beautiful drawer you are. :) There's not much I can say criticism wise since it's your own interpretation, but there are two little minor details that are bugging ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Is It Wrong?

    It normally doesn't take me that long either. Though with songs, that's a whole different story. I don't know why, because songs have more repetition than poems (for me they ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: We Are the Strong

    Thanks everyone for the reviews! but I'm not reviewing him, I'm reviewing you. ;) lol. Nikki's a girl. :wink: something just comes across about it that makes my brain click ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: We Are the Strong

    So, when you mentioned your source of inspiration, I went and found the poem. And while I have to agree that there are some similarities, yours is definitely one all ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Charlotte's Hymn part 1

    I have a question, is this about a slave escaping? If so, I would choose a different plot. Slavery is the most used subject of books. That and vampires. If ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: We Are the Strong

    Note: Yes, I know it's similar to Nikki Giovanni's "We Are Virginia Tech" (written after the shooting), but that's because we studied that poem today during English, so I was ...

    Jun 10, 2010


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