tommyknocker

I think this shows promise. But, i felt that it was very predictable. And... i dunno. That I've seen or heard or read this so many times before. I'm not ...

Hi. I just liked to say this is a interesting story. I liked the opening paragraph. Really grabbed my attention. Ahh...Whats a "Harvester." I'm guessing it's not a spud harvester ...

I'm assuming, that this is coming from very personal experience. However, reading through this i didn't feel any emotion at all. Elaborate on their deaths. Was it; murder, accident, illness ...

The door bell ringed and the hinge squeaked as the door opened. Tom Sheridan, a man in his mid fifties with fluffy curly hair, (like lambs wool some said) and ...

This is good, but quite short. But that doesn't make it a bad thing. My suggestion would be to describe your opponent, all i got is his big. Does he ...

Definitely "The Green Mile," and the "Shawshank redemption." Both classic tales. Amazing to think "Rita Hayworth and The Shawshank Redemption." Is only 132 pages long.

I just watched Braveheart. I do a awesome, "Freedom" Speech. Haha.

I haven't gone too a movie cinema in over a year. Damn you country life!! Wow, on thinking back, i have not watched any of these movies on this list. ...

When i was in year 3, i got bored with reading the "Laser Beam Series." So i read Bram Stokers, "Dracula." Nice read, and it's not that scary.

Being a S.K fan, i could rattle off numerous movies that were absolute rubbish to the book. Nonetheless. IT, is my favorite book by him and i bought the movie ...

I think this story needs more direction. I disagree with Alice, i completely don't like the ramblings of this character. Also, when she talks about, "sex drugs and rock and ...

Hi all thanks for posting. where is all that fear and terror? Was there not another door to run out from? I did have some better ideas for this. One ...

"Kevin should we really be doing this?" the attractive young blond whispered. The sun was up in the hills above the small logging community of Olsen and it's rays made ...

This is very well narrated. It reminds me of a loving grandmother, so delicately written. Terrific stuff. I have nothing else to say.

I agree with ziggiefred on this one. Try to incorporate actual speech into this piece it will make much better than it already is. Also add more about the glockenspiel, ...