tokipie

I really like the imagery! I must say, though, that the lines "That sounds so cliché now / But at the moment it was the most perfect thing" seem a ...

I really don't know what you are so worried about... the poem is fabulous! But I have to admit (and God, I must sound like a parrot here!) that I ...

Oh! Mesh, I forgot to mention that I really liked the right-side-up-and-up-side-down technique! I am seriously considering experimenting with it for my next poem. Thanx!! ^_^ xoxox, toki~

Hi everyone! Thanx so much for the reviews! Now it is time to faithfully proceed with my duties and answer your questions. Kyte and Swirl Antara: Well, it’s like MadHatter ...

Hi! This is my first poem here...

LOL, thanx! I like your avvie, too! I wonder why... :D And thax 4 the welcome! I'll make sure to send any questions... ;) ~toki

Hi! I'm new here, too, but I hope I can help. Your poem is what I like to call a "cute poem" -- short and sweet. However, the poem feels ...

Hello! I'm tokipie... or toki... o Mari, but I guess I'll be mostly referred to by my username :) Sooooo... yeah. I'm going to post something soon, so reviews will ...