tobyrocks17

such depth!such passion! beautifully written, it was quite possibly beyond my comprehension. The way you string words together is magical. Some writers (me for example) simply slap a story together, ...

thanks for all your help! this was written by a friend who really appreciates everyone's constructive criticism and advice. :elephant:

Since school's starting up again , I'll start editing again. Feel free to post any story/poem/creative piece, any size, any genre although I am much better at critiquing stories than ...

thank you very much for all the help! :elephant:

thanks for the advice. I'll take it into consideration. :elephant:

I've got two; romantic/sci-fi and an..other one. [url] [url] ^^ I may have failed miserably at the urls. (and at spelling.) :elephant:

I'm not quite sure about this one.. Comments,questions,ideas would be appreciated

comments,questions,concerns,editing, would be greatly appreciated.

Super Heroes By Jordan Hindrichs Normal people, unlike myself, address Super Heroes as fakes, and even by the off chance they find out that they were wrong, they’d still live ...

“Please mum, don't go!” I scream frantically at the top of my lungs, trying anything to keep my so-called mother from leaving me this very afternoon, perhaps forever. At the ...