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titikemp

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Unsurprising

    I love this! I'm madly in love with Zoro, on an almost sketchy level :smt055 , and i literally laughed out loud when reading part of this. Though when you ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Softness of Doves

    To be honest, i couldn't read the whole thing. The very first sentance is SO important and i didn't even know what was happening in the beging. I wouldn't have ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Musings of A Creature

    This was beautifuly written, i just have to mention that you say visage twice, and although they're far apart, the word is unusual enough that it seemed repetitive. I have ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Wishful Thinking

    Before i say anything else, I just have to say that i think what you did must have been really hard and i'm proud of you without even knowing you. ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Under the light of the Moon

    I love this... It's really weird, but i think understand what you're saying. It's really cool, you just put "about a young gir land a dragon" but that's just a ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Not yet titled

    The idea for this story, or what i know of it so far, seems really interesting. There was a small grammar error: "when a somebody finally came to my cell" ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Human

    Wow... That was stunning. This whole idea is amazing! Your writing is absolutly beautiful and the story as a whole was just awesome. The only thing i didn't understand was ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Already Fallen

    I'm not that into poetry, so i don't know if my opinion will be worth much, but i found that the flow of your poem was difficult to follow. I ...

    Oct 19, 2011


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