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Re: Unsurprising
I love this! I'm madly in love with Zoro, on an almost sketchy level :smt055 , and i literally laughed out loud when reading part of this. Though when you ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
To be honest, i couldn't read the whole thing. The very first sentance is SO important and i didn't even know what was happening in the beging. I wouldn't have ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Musings of A Creature
This was beautifuly written, i just have to mention that you say visage twice, and although they're far apart, the word is unusual enough that it seemed repetitive. I have ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Wishful Thinking
Before i say anything else, I just have to say that i think what you did must have been really hard and i'm proud of you without even knowing you. ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Under the light of the Moon
I love this... It's really weird, but i think understand what you're saying. It's really cool, you just put "about a young gir land a dragon" but that's just a ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Not yet titled
The idea for this story, or what i know of it so far, seems really interesting. There was a small grammar error: "when a somebody finally came to my cell" ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Human
Wow... That was stunning. This whole idea is amazing! Your writing is absolutly beautiful and the story as a whole was just awesome. The only thing i didn't understand was ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Already Fallen
I'm not that into poetry, so i don't know if my opinion will be worth much, but i found that the flow of your poem was difficult to follow. I ...
Oct 19, 2011
