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Re: Unsurprising
I love this! I'm madly in love with Zoro, on an almost sketchy level :smt055 , and i literally laughed out loud when reading part of this. Though when you ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Heart of an Animal
Music filled the winding corridors and narrow passages. Libi made her way slowly past the deep shadows of looming statues. Part of her wished she’d stayed home, but the music ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Metal- Prologue
That was amazing! I have nothing bad to say at all. This is quite possibly the best story i've read in a very long time.
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
To be honest, i couldn't read the whole thing. The very first sentance is SO important and i didn't even know what was happening in the beging. I wouldn't have ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Circus
Sargsauce, I appreciate your honesty in the review. i corrected the semicolon. When i reread it, i noticed i was wrong, so thank you. However, i'd like to justify rushing ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Musings of A Creature
This was beautifuly written, i just have to mention that you say visage twice, and although they're far apart, the word is unusual enough that it seemed repetitive. I have ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 1
You're a really good writer! I love this time period, and although i was a little confused, i think that was your intention. I just had to say that it ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Wishful Thinking
Before i say anything else, I just have to say that i think what you did must have been really hard and i'm proud of you without even knowing you. ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Under the light of the Moon
I love this... It's really weird, but i think understand what you're saying. It's really cool, you just put "about a young gir land a dragon" but that's just a ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Not yet titled
The idea for this story, or what i know of it so far, seems really interesting. There was a small grammar error: "when a somebody finally came to my cell" ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Human
Wow... That was stunning. This whole idea is amazing! Your writing is absolutly beautiful and the story as a whole was just awesome. The only thing i didn't understand was ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Already Fallen
I'm not that into poetry, so i don't know if my opinion will be worth much, but i found that the flow of your poem was difficult to follow. I ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Circus
In a small town on the outskirts of a great nation, a circus came to life. This circus was split in two separate parts. One was drowning in music and ...
Oct 19, 2011
