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I swear, I literally cried when I read this. It reminded me of my childhood. So many emotions washed over me, but it had a good feeling to it. It ...

All I can say is that this was an amazing, well written poem. I have never read such a great poem like this one before. At first, I couldn't tell ...

Oh, my gosh. That was so deep, so inspiring, it captured my heart. It really makes you think how society wants us to be and what we sometimes wants to ...

Thanks, HollowPoint! You know, i'm glad that youre helping me with constructive criticism. it actually helps and it works out! Just to let you know, i'll leave the subconscious arguments ...

"Mom! Dad! Lu!" I shouted. My paws pounded on the pavement as I raced back to my house. The scent of fire was in the air and I became afraid. ...

Wow that was a good chapter. Now I'm not one to nitpick bur I did see a few errors that you might want to look over. But other than that, ...

Wow why stop there? I say keep writing! Leaving the story hanging like that keeps me and other readers wanting more. Grammar, spelling was great. There would only be one ...

So yeah the other reviewers caught the grammar and nick pick stuff like that. I'd say it was great, but you said you don't like people telling you that it's ...

Wow. That's all I can say. That was an amazing beginning. It just yanked me right in and I couldn't stop reading. Grammar, spelling, punctuation, all correct. I found nothing ...

That story was very captivating! From the beginning, it immediately captured my attention. I could not stop reading and now I can't stop waiting. You have to write the next ...

Chapter 2 When the first rays of the sun crept into my room, I stirred. My eyes slowly opened; my room aglow with bursts of purple, yellow and orange light. ...

Prologue: Before I begin to tell you my story, you should know a little about my life. First of all, my name is Mukuka. Most people can't even pronounce it, ...

Wow. I'd have to say this was a really good start to your book. Most everyone has picked out my nitpicks, so I'll just say all the good and bad ...

Hmm, what should I say about this? First of all, it's a good story through and through. But you can make the chapters a little longer. That way, you can ...

Oh my gosh, I love this book. It has to be one of my favorite books on this site. The emotions, the drama, the details make it seem so real, ...