tinkembell

so this is the second chapter of the last angel which is part of a novel, please reveiw :) Chapter two That night Ambriel had a dream. A horrible dream. ...

wow i thought this was really good, you have great characters, you describe them well and show how they feel.i think your plot is going to unfold well and there ...

i thought this story was really good, you have a great plot going on and your characters are very good. As the story went on it got even better i ...

wow, this was really good and very moving i loved how you did the ending,talking to her family even though they couldnt hear her. the only problems were that you ...

i thought this was really good and loved the way it improve you could maybe give a little background info, not too much but i wanted to know what the ...

wow really good writing, i loved the description and vocabulary you used. He will not have me. He says he does, but he’s a bad liar i dont think this ...

well first off i thought it was really good and the ending made me wanted to read more, what was written on the letter?? Some sparles followed after them i ...

this is a story i'm working on its about 22 chapters long (not all here, don't worry) please tear it apart if it makes it better, thanks (: Chapter one ...