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I thought this was really good, this was my favourite part And then the evening unfolds, And up in space the moon beholds... On empty blackened cloudless skies And quiet ...

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Cool list, geuss like everyone else said you need to cross off 100 a lot of the things you want to do are really easily done, very inspirational :) I ...

Cool list, geuss like everyone else said you need to cross off 100 a lot of the things you want to do are really easily done, very inspirational :) I ...

:) I agree with everyone, very funny suprising too, thought it was a love poem, lol my favourite part was the end

Please feel free to pick it apart just don't take it too far :p Flushing red cheeks heart beat racing clammy warm hands bitten lip eyes looking down feet are ...

if you liked this please reveiw my last angel novel which is ish connected :) please

Wow very good, it was creepy and mystical and the only problem was you need more connecting words in your scentences to make it flow :)

It was really good :) the onlly problems were to do with the flow of it. His perfect eyes, his soft and shiny hair, his cute smile that made me ...

I thought this was very good, I don't think there were any grammar or spelling mistakes and it was a very imaginitive idea. You missed Jasper out on the part ...

Wow, very good, it was simple but it made it effective (ok, I admit it - i don't know wether it's an e or an a but...). Christmas I i ...

This poem is linked to my last angel novel, hope you all enjoy :) I lie in wait for I know my fate when I return to the skies they ...

wow it was really good and i havent got much more to add on because everyone's already said it, keep up the writing :)

Wow the story sounded really good and there were hardly any typos i just think you need to stop using so many commas, if you use a connecting word such ...

Thanks for the reveiw but i don't agree with what you said, if you had taken the time to to read the first chapter then you would know what it ...