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You will protect me, you promised. I trust you with that, you can't break your word, you wouldn't. Would you? No matter the situation you will be by my side, ...

Wow I agree, a story would be brilliant :)

First off welcome to YWS :) Pm me if you need any help or ask the guys in green - they know things ( we may be confusing :) ) ...

I loved this poem, problem is the very first line threw me off, a clam? i'm sorry it just made me laugh for some reason and i don't feel it ...

You shall be forever in my heart. Nothing and no one can change that, our bond is stronger, there is no way of breaking it... Except, I wish there were, ...

Wow I thought this was really good, I'm not too big of a percy jackson fan but it was quite interesting :) I'm not going to give it a big ...

Wow very impressive :) Kind of powerful for such a short piece. Only problems: . In a way I found it surreal it then goes on to say; It would ...

Predator Lion stalking prey, camouflaged by long dead grass, dead gazelle, at peace. The sea Sunlight on water, rippling waves upon sand, a shining seashell. Moonlit beauty A magical horse, ...

Wow, very impressive, i really liked the feel of the story, The ending was my favourite part :) The sun was rising as I glanced out the window. A tear ...

Very Powerful :) The only thing that let it down was the flow, it felt broken, lIkE. YOu.. HaAd T.o REAd iT lik.E t.h.i.s. There were only a couple of ...

Thanks :) somebody finally got it!

Maybe I shouldn't give it away but it does tell you on the last line :) thanks for the reveiws mwa ha ha ha ha ha! You fools he shall ...

lol :D

Hanging eerily way up in the sky, casting shadows low and high, mystical glows that chill through the bones, sitting up there all alone. Like a phantom ghost coming out ...

Sounded good, like EAThomas said i think you need to take off the italics and break it up into paragraphs, other than that it was interesting and i'd love to ...