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:) really, really liked this keep up the writing :P ~ Tinkem

Wow, really good :) only fault is the speech ( I would put a link but I really can't be bothered) but basically eventhough you put a full stop the ...

Wow impressive. I loved how you could convey such emotion in such a short piece, I think the style really worked for you :) Nothing I can really comment to ...

Wow, I thought this was really good, just a few nitpicks; Meanwhile, the troubadour was running towards the sound. He stopped by a huge oak tree, sure that the peculiar ...

Thanks :) edited it now, at least I think ( I don't mean I can't remember, I mean- oh.. :/) anyway I didn't think it was that good so, :) ...

There are no Happily Ever Afters, Fairy Tale Endings, or Once Upon a Times, in reality there is no true love, only in myths, stories and rhymes. Have you actually ...

very good - i wish I coul draw like that :) More please *does confined finger dancing to congratulate you* well have to go, my monkey needs me Keep it ...

Impressive. All I can say, impressive. Only flaw I found was this; her surroundings ; nothing but wood and debris scattered the inside of the church, which now stood without ...

Wow :) I thought this was very good just a couple of nitpicks; Always heard of love but never experienced it. I don't think it and myth actually rhyme Is ...

really good, i won't go indepth because ilovebubbles already did but I want MORE, there just isn't enough for me, what happened at high school? Other than that, very impressive ...

interesting :) only thing is it is impossible to be somebodys younger sibling by a month, plain IMPOSSIBLE. unless you have the solution, please tell me if you do, other ...

The pure shadows have been waiting in secrecy for over five hundred million years. Now that it has finally been born into this world there are only fifteen years left ...

wow, impressive poem i've never heard a peacock be put into that perspective before. There isn't much to say that hasn't already been said so again very good poem, keep ...

I thought this was good and I'd like to read more but at the moment it's a little boring, not interesting enough to make you want to read more, I ...

Well first off welcome to YWS :) if you need any help just pm.... somebody or ask somebody who is green, they know things. First off I really liked the ...