tinkembell

Writers and artists yearbook - any year, preferably the current one :D

Hi, glad your liking it here :D What magazines were you published in? I normally write short stories and poems, I'm too lazy to write anyhting else :) ~ Tinkem ...

Very disapointed- scratch that EXTREMLY disapointed, I geuss I would live if I didn't know about YWS beforehand but... :/

:) I liked this, I won't nitpick because it has already been done, but the title should be sincerely not sincery, other than that, very good :D Keep up the ...

Wow :D that's what I'm trying to do at the moment, was it self-published or accepte by an agent/publisher?

Impressive :) I really liked this and I can't find any faults - except the capitals! If you put a comma then you shouldn't put a capital on the next ...

:) loved it. Can't find any faults either. Just goes to show you shouldn't give up, it took you what, two years to get this on featured works? :P keep ...

:) You have a point, I agree with you and armstronge, people don't want to wath or read about perfect things because to them, it's ordinary, normal and boring even ...

Very impressive :D Really good use of detail too. a bit confusing for me but I loved it all the same. Only fault; YOUR PUNCTUATION HAS WANDERED OFF! :O sorry ...

:) I really liked this. I agree with charcoalspacewolfman though; it does sound unfinnished. Oh and you might wanna get some punctuation in there too. Apart from that it was ...

Meh, won't let me delete it *pouts* :( OK, sorry to those people who commented but since I can't delete, I'll just change it, doubt you can delete your comments ...

:) I thought this was really good only thing being ( yes this is coming from somebody who knows nothing about photography) the yellow is a little too bright for ...

wow, really good :) only fault being this; My cap against , T t he chain-link fence, M m y eyes glued , T t o tight offense. obviously that ...

Hi, Tinkem here :), this is how I would change this (not that it was rubbish to start off with, I thought it was quite good :P); [center]Rose petals fall ...

A cold, outstreched hand, welcoming you to him, his land. A shiver, a tingling embrace, the look of apprehension on your face. You falter as he laughs, you realise he ...