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Well, first off, welcome to YWS! I really liked this poem, and freeverse is fine, it doesn't make it any less of a poem/less epic ^_^ (also, teardrop suggested google-ing, ...

Wow. This was just so brilliantly funny, yet simple :) I really have nothing to add, except: I think, you should say the tangerine is "pink" ;) Green just doesn't ...

well, first off, I really liked this ^_^ it was emotional, yet not too cliche, and very interesting xD I'm afraid to say, although stargazer9927 split your stanzas up for ...

Acrostic poems are really cool, and well I loved this one. ^_^ I had to do them in school about four years ago, and they were all to do with ...

Hi! Well, I'd love to say I really loved this poem, but, um I didn't. I'm not saying you're not a good writer (because you probably are ^_^) or that ...

I loved it! I know there's not much to review, but it IS a haiku. I think there is good imagery in there, and I really liked how you made ...

Wow, I really loved this poem ^_^ it was delicate, sad, yet... I didn't really know what it was about, which was great. :) A bit of critique-yness: The canvas, ...

Hi ilyah, welcome to YWS! ^_^ I hope you enjoy it here, and find your way around. Just a little suggestion, you might want to get yourself an avatar, all ...

Well, I really liked this poem, the message comes across very clearly, however I agree with Lava and perdido, it is a bit 'preachy' and 'lecture-y' I think what they ...

First off, welcome to YWS! Wow, I really loved this poem, there's some great imagery and it left me with a warm fuzzy sort of feeling, what I would suggest ...

First off, welcome to YWS! ^_^ I thought this poem was very good, it kept my interest and had a story to tell. The theme really drew me in, I'm ...

O.o I definetly did a review, it added to my personal review count, and gave me points, BUT IT DIDNT ADD TO MY TEAMS SCORE!

Here on a reviewing rampage ^_^ well, I thought that this was very good, I love the texture of the fur and the way he looks at you, as if ...

AGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I'M HYPERVENTALATING CAUSE THIS IS SO EXCITING!!! ^_^ 20! #20 Nice Wolfy The jet black wolf attacked his prey, he licked his ravenous lips, ran a tongue over aching ...

^_^ 19... I've come so far! Next year I WILL do thirty, I'll make it a new years resolution... #19 Just Another Face This silver, blood tainted sword you yield, ...