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58 - ask EVERYONE on the WRFF forum to review your work, and when they do, complain that everyone is attacking you/your piece. 59- make another account and use it ...

Hello, fellow Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem ;) I didn't quite get it, but all the same, I thought it was great, there was good emotion, and an ...

Here to Bamboozle you ^_^ so, uh, I've seen a few of these, and this one seems pretty good :) I love the picture (blowing paint with a straw?) because ...

In the silent darkness, that blanketed the night, Death held out a hand, and walked with you a while. His folorn, somber air, cloaked with shadowed might, was tainted with ...

Here to review as requested! I really loved this, I think your idea is great, and the characters seem really interesting, especially their situations. It wasn't boring, and you made ...

I'm not sure if this is supposed to go here, and it's probably been mentioned, but with the new notification thing, my notifications are strange, everytime something happens, it's says ...

Here to bamboozle you! Well, first off I think that it's good to be inspired by what you're writing, and that allthough they're only rough, I think they're pretty good ...

Here to Bamboozle you! I have to agree with HostofHorus on this one, seriously, I loved it. It was dreamlike and swirly and hazy. I don't think it matters that ...

Welcome to YWS! first off, I really liked this, it was good for a first post, and I liked the perspective on things, he could of done something, but he's ...

Aww, I liked this, it was kind of simple, but sweet. Matthews is right though, all you've really done is describe the picture, which was great, but I think you ...

hehe, I liked this, I think it has a sort of nursery rhyme feel, but at the same time, it's older than that. It made me laugh too. My only ...

Hi iampaulop! Welcome to YWS ^_^ If you need any help, or get confused, feel free to ask for help, or ask someone in green (they know things :)) So ...

aww, I loved this poem :) Although the topic was a little cliche, I think it was brilliant. It was sad, but not too emotional at the same time. It ...

Hello Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem, even though it's short, and has a few problems (which can easily be fixed :)) I thought that the faint imagery and ...