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Re: Moni (ch.1)
CHAPTER 1 It started out like a regular day. I awoke around 6:15 to get ready for school. “Moni,” rang my mother’s voice from downstairs, “get down here! You’re food ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Cameron Girls~1
I think that this story is a great rough draft. What I mean by this is it doesn't have the cohesiveness and polish of a finished product. I suggest that ...
Jul 24, 2010
