timjim77

Wow. I love how you have combined what seems to be your world view, your religion, and your poetic sense all into one. Truly, an exquisite insight. Perhaps the colon ...

Capitalize Greyhound. Sandwich kind of seems vulgar as a verb here. Other than those minutiae, wonderful. You have described a peculiar feeling with clarity, while keeping the fogginess of it ...

I. When in subtle mass I weighed, Latent boughs kicked fleshy drum. Falling circumstances staid The appetite for love and thumb. Patience swaddled in the moons Through clouds about my ...

Thanks for your advice. I see your point about the rhythm, and I suppose that's the problem with posting lyrics, as muh of the song informs the rhythm, and si ...

Well, actually, it does make sense, perhaps not to you. The poem is written about, among other things, Holy Communion as celebrated in the Catholic Church. One of the ways ...

"Turn the other cheek" does not necessarily refer to pacifism. It can mean to not seek retribution in any form, or to an even greater extreme, not seek compensation in ...

Get rid of "*This is a composite poem*." Now, onto the real thing. Amazing. Really well written. The contrast between the parade and the people on the hill was the ...

Interesting ideas. But I think the difference between Christian theology and the Witch theology you have descirbed is this: Christian theology is based on what is believed to be revealed, ...

Depdns on how you define terrorism. Some would say that we have terrorists attacking us right now, in the form of corporations or the government. Terrorism is a tactice to ...

I guess the actual problem is whether the future is predetermined or not. There are cause and effect chains that will certainly affect the future in existence today, but are ...

I agree with both Lama and Galatea. My point is not that the ends justify the means. I don't believe that at all. What I am saying is that as ...

Bobby, why the harsh tone at the end? As a matter of fact, I was already aware of these injustices. I know that's ahrd to believe. let's talk about this ...

Sureal, I think you misunderstand. Firstly, if you believe that there is possibly a God, you are not an atheist, you're an agnostic. Unless what you're saying is you don't ...

You have to understand that no-one is raised in a vacuum - bringing up your child an athiest is exactly the same as bringing them up Christian - it's just ...

All of them....? find me the radical terrorist buddhists. "The first of the five fundamental Buddhist precepts is "Avoid killing any living thing." That is because from the Mahayana perspective, ...