timjim77

b's look like b's? Wait, no. Oh, I'm so dyslexic. This is awesome.

Cool. Very Neo-Dutch.

Another joined us as we rode He was a Bard, or so he showed With easy words and nimble wit, Of which he claimed he never writ, But made upon ...

Ha.

Personally, I liked your ending. It put a quick blade to a poem that could have bordered on sugary. The imagery was excellent, and simple as well, which is good. ...

A family is a Church With wounded steeples That reach towards Luminous rooms. Hopes for mentioned Mansions lingering, Imposed on linen sighs. Limping congregations Swaying in prayer Falling onto other

Everything about Jasper was flat. Except for the mountains in the east, the land was as smooth as a pastor’s hair, slicked back with raspberry pomade. The air was flat ...

Hmm, is this about a pole dancer? If it is, this is the most poetic description of it I have ever read. i don't think it's actually about a frog./ ...

YO, thanks for the replies, they were very interesting. Whille there defintely was meaning here, I can see how it might be lost in the structure of the poem. And ...

my teeth scream bloody tears of holes fill me up fill me up fill me down light is scary, I like the Dark(ness) (Re)volving pain inside my Crown. My crown ...

Very Sapphic (in the poetic sense). I like.

if anyone knows why the 'pre' button doesn't work for me, please let me know. thank you.

It is a scoundrel fact That there are ends To things that never See their own beginnings; That things can die Before they are born Into the process of dying. ...

I am the Lotus Eater I like to taste something a little sweeter I’ll chew your petals fine Gotta rush now, ain’t got no time to dine I’ll help you ...

very nice. Watch colloquialisms like "tear-jerker" and "have my fun".